Inq Penance Brand Diss help how to improve

Can someone check my POB and suggest what I should prioritise next?

I like the build and want to push for bossing

old POB
https://pobb.in/jjsZGZFGNW5f



Edit:
Finally able to understand what I was doing wrong

new POB
https://pobb.in/dolcEKhEtLdG